This is the final responses that I received on the double page spread and I will be giving another summary of there responses so that I have a better understanding of what I need to edit on the next magazine.
Summary:
The responses for this page was very simple since there is not much on it. To start off, the image on the left needs to improve but they say that it is fine to have an image take up a whole page space but they would like to have a better photo. Then the article needs to improve and be longer. The article should also have more quotes and definitely have more information and be more about the player. They want to see the players life and what motivates him to play the sport. The article needs to be more personal and give the audience of the featured players life. Finally there should be a title of the article and not just the players name.
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